Accidental suicide

She hit

Her head

And

Drowned.

It’s what

The cops said,

When

They found

My body,

Down

By the

Lake.

It is what

It appears,

Is it not?

A girl,

Always,

So happy,

And never down,

Found,

With water,

In her,

Lungs.

She never cried,

Never even frowned,

Not when,

Anybody,

Was around,

So,

It must have,

Been a,

Terrible accident,

But no,

They did not,

Know,

What went on,

Behind,

Closed doors.

She may,

Have seemed,

So strong,

Ready to make,

You smile,

When you're down.

But she lived,

In a place,

A place,

Called Hell.

It was,

An accident,

They were,

So sure,

But,

I guess,

You could,

Call it,

An accidental,

Suicide.

Reviews

[Minecrafter2098]

Wow! That was really good!

I loved the simplicity of your poem. It's easy to understand and it's quite relatable!

[Shah Sabia]

Such a light read.
Well done, keep it up :)

[Zami Amma]

This is so perfect and relatable, I definetely feel the emotions here. Very well done!

[Emily]

I really like it!
Well done!
Keep it up!!!

[GPR]

Such a deep and dark. Truly a masterpiece! :)

[Misery]

Straight down the middle and to the point.
Nicely composed, dear Poet. I love it!

[Daughter of Darkness]

Oh my gosh. I wanna cry. Good job.

[Cocachloe]

Wow, I think a lot of us can relate to the girl in the poem. No one knows what we're going through.

[potato]

Thanks lots.

[Malark]

Very emotional, very abstract and powerful. This poem brings together a great and patient flow, with words as strong as it's message. Great job.

[potato]

Thank you.