Just Breath.......

You,

It was you,

Who I thought of,

As I,

Wrote but then,

 tore,

Up that note,

As I began to cry,

Because I knew,

 Today,

I was not going to die.....

Just always know,

That it was you,

You who I,

Thought of,

As I stopped,

And decided to,

Just,

Breath...

Reviews

[terry smith]

Loved it!! adding it to my library if you don't mind.

[Mychaos]

Fantastic. Really well written. I like that the rhythm of this poem is so staggered.

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Oh wow so beautiful and powerful.


God will put the people
we need in our lives can be a blessing.


This put me to tears I've lost a young cousin
in law and great grandpa and
young friend to suicide but we always wish
that something could of stop it from happening.


This touched my heart strings
thank you for sharing.

God bless Benita

[potato]

Oh thank you. I have really had a tough time and writing things like this always help me cope. My best friend recently committed suicide and i always knew that he was there for me and that he is still with me no matter where I go or what I do.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

I've lost 2 family members and a
young friend to suicide on here I forget his
name but I understand how that feels not a
pleasant place to be when it happens. You're welcome. Take care

[Just Because]

This just really resonates with me ... powerful.

[potato]

thank you for your review

[Alfred Kukitz]

The structure and idea compliment each other. I have to compliment you on a rare and distinguished thought process. Short, brief, packed with punch!

[potato]

Thank you!