Butterfly's

A Valentines poem

Walking home 

Passing a store

Glancing in the window

Smiling softy

Unlocking the door

Throwing my bag on my bed

"I can't believe I bought it..."

Sighing I set it on my desk

waking up

My heart beating fast

The butterfly's start their dance

My hands in my pockets

Bag on my shoulder

Nerves creeping in

Butterfly's 

Take a deep breath

"Calm down" I think to myself

"Everyone's doing it"

Walking home with you

You talking about your latest crush

Another guy who you gave chocolate to

I smile and listen
but only just

As we pass the place where we first met 

The butterfly's dance again

I stop and you ask what's wrong

I bite my lip and hand you the small box

You smile and thank me

Asking how I knew these are your favorite

My stomach doing flips

I wish the butterfly's would calm down

You laugh when I shrug 

And take my hand in yours

You whisper a soft "thank you"

Lightly kissing me on the cheek

Author's Note

Hey, Just thought i could try something else besides depressing. tell me how i can improve next time Thanx! oh and please review :P

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

This is a great poem about the beginning of a new romance. It is done in a creative and unique way the the flow is smooth almost seamless. The picture of a young couple holding hands comes to mine and i like how you describe being nervous. Butterflies.

[Kaitlyn]

its cute how this is written. I like it :)

[Kathryn Saunders]

awe. that was adorable and soft and sweet! loved it.

[HopelesslyDevoted]

this is so adorable! i can always tell a poem is good when i find myself falling head over heels for it. lol! i'm in love with this one for sure! so cute!!

[guiltyascharged]

Oh, how I wish I could do that with the one I love. Alas, it's forbidden.