Falling

just the way I'm feeling

Sometimes I wish for falling,

Wish for the release...

Wish for falling through the air,

To give me some relief.

Because falling's not the problem,

When I'm falling, I'm at peace.

It's only when I hit the gound...

It causes all the grief.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Kaitlyn]

really good!

[Kathryn Saunders]

Very nice one. I really enjoyed the point you are trying to get across.

[♍ Kirstin ♎]

Wow. I love this!!! I love how it's so simple and so short yet extreemly effective. Amasing write!!

[VelvetRosetta]

Makes sense...sounds like me sometimes...

[guiltyascharged]

I like it.

[Poetic Beauty]

I like this poem and it is so true. It isn't the falling that hurts it is hitting the ground. Great imagery planted in the mind and the metaphor is well done.

[HopelesslyDevoted]

totally can relate to this, this is always have views suicide. death is not the end, most people don't realize that when they want to die. it may not be any easier on the other side.

[Bridget Mcmaken]

wonderful write. It flows nicely. I love the last two lines.

[DearWorld]

This is completely relatable and I love the last two lines. Great write

[Cynthia]

OH, I so know what you mean, the feelings you have!
Very nice written, and a good way to express your feeling!
Great write