Broken Love

just writing

Please don't say you love me

While you're happy with someone else

I wont try and get in between you

I'd rather just suffer through this

My heart is broken

So stop worrying 

I'll smile 

Not really feeling like I can make it

I'll laugh

Even if it sounds broken

Though inside

I feel like I'm breaking 

So I wont say I love you

Because I know it's true

When you say you don't love me too.

Author's Note

review please :D

Reviews

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Very well written! You have expressed feelings so deeply in this poem that the reader can't help but feel the sadness!

[Poetic Beauty]

This sounds like a complicated situation and you have expressed it well in this poem.

[Bridget Mcmaken]

Beautiful poem. I wish you the best and I'm sorry that she did this to you. You written this very well. I like the flow of it. Short, sweet, and right down to the point. Very well done sam sam!

[Rikkevi Rue]

the emotional impact of the message overrides any imagined errors in the delivery medium (ie, language). Your poem invites participation from the reader, insights one to commiserate, empathize, "bond,"etc., so who cares about the grammar...it drips the appropriate liquids in the appropriate fashion to the desired result ;~)

[EnternalNight]

Grammar freak XDDD