I'm Fine

I'm Fine

A Poem by EnternalNight
"

I'll leave it to ur imagination

"
every time I see you
you look like you have walked a thousand miles
every time I talk to you
your voice sounds so tired
when I ask whats wrong 
you say nothing and move on
why do you lie?
I don't understand
is it so I don't worry?
because it just makes me sad
the words I'm Fine
always get me thinking
why would you lie?
when people can see right through your scheme
I don't understand
cuz every time I look at you
I can tell you've been crying
don't you understand 
I can tell your lieing
when you say your fine
can't you tell I feel like crying?

© 2010 EnternalNight


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I'm fine is the biggest effing lie EVER. If you're seriously okay, never say "i'm fine" to me because i'll think ur lying immediately. doesnt mean i'll SAY anything, but i'll know.

this poem flows nicely, wondeful concept. love it, samsam

Posted 14 Years Ago


wow, this is written very well. It flows nicely

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on November 30, 2010
Last Updated on December 26, 2010
Tags: lie heart, break, hugs, hurt, crying

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