Hate at first site (Nicholas's Version)

this is Nicks POV from the first chapter. Its a bit diffrent.

I first saw her at a football game. I was writing at my colleges football game. Now i don't usually do this but my old friend from England suggested  that I do it. Just because no one else writes out in public doesn't mean i cant. So i was writing a poem describing football games, when i started to feel a stare on me. I ignored it thinking, it just must be weird to see a person writing during a football game instead of watching it, but after the first quarter i still felt it on me. Mabie the game was over,  and i just was very didn't hear the other quarter bells ring ( i tend to get lost in my poetry) and people were staring at me waiting for me to move. So I looked up, not everyone was staring at me just a girl, well more like a women. She had long, curly dirty blond hair and had big brown eyes that were almost black. She was wearing a simple tank top and holey jeans. Looked like a typical American if i ever saw one. She also looked like trouble.She was looking at me like all of the American girls did, those i want him, eyes. So i looked at my watch like I had somewhere to go and ran out of the stadium with politely scooting by the football watchers.

Author's Note

i take constructive criticism.