Love at first site (Mary Grace's Version)

this is the Marys version of when Nick and her first met. Nicks version is very diffrent so i will be posting both chapters

At a football game is where I first saw him. He was the only other person writing instead of watching the football game. I was watching him write for at least 15 minutes (that's only a brief estimate i lost count  watching his arm move swiftly across the page) He suddenly looked at me for a second then looked at his watch . Then he picked up his writing and ran quickly down the stadium being very polite as he passed the complete strangers. Then he was out of site. I had to find out where he was going. So i picked up my stuff and quickly ran down the stadium without any politeness, polite was out of my dictionary at this time of day because i just had my eye set on the complete stranger and had to find out where he was going. Now i was usually not this nosy. i usually kept to myself and let everyone else live their own lives but this guy was different.

Author's Note

i take constuctive critisim. I'm always looking for new ways to improve my story. =]