The Game I Will Play

just a random write

            Hush,hush .                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          Stay calm i'm doing this for your own good.                                                                                                         Stay still . It'll go quick                                                                                                     You can hold my hand . Only because i feel pity for your weakness.                                                               Why don't you try to fight?   I know you can try .                                                                                  why must you believe im the one ? im not meant for you.                                                                     why, i despise you. i hate you. Your face is always stain to my eye lids. Your smell is in my nose . I claw my shoulder peeling off my skin you touched. Your sent sinks into my clothes. I rip them off and go for new ones. I hate you. I want you to slowly perish while i watch you die in sorrowful pain as you scream out your woe. I would feel . Not regret . But pity. Please leave while your still breathing . Or my mind will get the best of me. i HEAR whispers in my heart . They tell me to love . My mind thinks don't don't love . Love is hate masked in disguise . Only meant to fool the  idiotic. I scream out . please I beg you . I don't want to love . it will kill me. iT will shatter my heart into ash that  is taken by the wind and swept into oblivion so i can never get it back. I kneel at your dirty feet . Please let me go on hating the world. You , you my dear have the power to make me love. Your eyes at one glance to mine make me die inside. I can't love you . For im afraid of the ending . Are you truley the weak one? Do you pity me for being afraid of my childish fears. I want to know! i want you hand now!!!! I WANT YOUR SENT . i want your touch your laugh . Your idiotic mind. Most of all i want to be brave. I love you my dear . Thats why i have to wait silently . To kill your heart slowly in pain to break your heart so you don't break my first. Hush,hush, run,run, Hurry leave, rush ,rursh

Author's Note

THIS a fake story . just to make you think or feel something you may have never felt heres a song to go with it --http://youtu.be/b4rXbSnk2ng

Reviews

[chuna]

yah,, i feel the feeling of the story,,
i like your poem,,
sometimes we doesn't what are we writing but ,it all makes senses,

[James William Dyer]

I like how the poem starts out with an indication of punishment, for your own good. And then it descends into a rebellion from this submission. I think it could use a little work in terms of rhythym, but it has a lot of emotion.....,that's just my opinion. I really liked the poem, especially the beginning.

[Claire Twinn]

Decision decisions, sounds dangerous either way to me! Do you mean sent or scent?

[Larrycall]

http://youtu.be/b4rXbSnk2ng