She wants to go home

about a time i had gone through

 shes trapped in a never ending world inside her very head. Her thoughts so unreal. Her childish fears are what get the best of her . The mask she wears like makeup . The deep wondering times when shes far from her home. Lost in a dark forest of trees that hold all the lies and  secrets she'd never be  told. The blades of grass show how many times shes been back stabbed.Shes confused in  A WORLD far from yours . A world that makes no sense to anyone else. A book could never fill all the unfortunate events her life had told. Her tears have ran out . All she wants is to go home but nobody's home. 

Reviews

[Patrick Henry]

Nice!! There is one song I like by Avril, and it's "Nobody's Home"!! I read your paragraph and liked it, thinking the whole time...."Don't mention Avril, Don't mention Avril"..lol And then YOU did...kinda. : ) You are a lot of fun to read, so it was nice to see something totally different than your other writing this time. Ssshhh, I have the song playing right now. xoxo -Mark

[Larrycall]

ikr . i kinda based it off the song , but i wrote it when i was sad . its all real feelings just added a lil of avril

[chuna]

very nice one!i can feel the emotions because i also experience that,,,

[Larrycall]

thanks . we all experience not fitting or being alone

[The Invisible Girl]

This is really good! Shows lots of emotion and is well-written. Great job. Keep it up! 100/100

[Larrycall]

thanks !