You Are

Beauty hold its part

 

 

You are

As my feelings say

You are my morning sun

Welcoming as its ray

 

Your eyes are like still water

Beauty holds its part

Your smile

Ignites my heart

 

Your hands so tender

Smooth and such

Your hair is so beautiful

So soft to touch

 

You are

My song bird

So cheerful

And always heard

 

I’d hold you close

As we dance

If given

One chance

 

Author's Note

Some words that fell from me a long long time ago.
I was 15 when I wrote this.

Reviews

[Lillian]

aww..

[Lily Mae]

Perfect.. :) x

[anne p. murray- LadeeAn..]

Beautiful, soulful and very well well written especially for a 15 yr. old

[Electa]

True Love! If there were only more like you!

[honeyleens]

Just simply said and heartfelt - very sweet to be written when you were 15! I liked this, it made me smile.

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This is so sweet and wonderful

[Im His Daughter]

great poem Lawrence.. so cute

[Kiri Nells]

So sweet! I really like it!

[Norma M Sutton]

Oh my . . . a romantic at 15 :) This is nice.

[Aurora Lynn]

I really liked this poem! I liked how the poem flowed from one line to another. This was very well written. Thank you for writing!