Smooth as Silk
A Story by
lawrence bear
a love poem
For years,
I wanted to tell you.
The affect,
You have on me.
I've let you control me,
Let you inside my head.
I've given you everything,
Even my life.
My spirit,
My heart.
When the time has come,
To tell you of my love.
Say what I've felt,
How I've yearned you.
"I love you" I say,
I open up to you.
In front of your peers,
You whispered in their ears.
You looked around,
To make sure everyone was watching
"That's cute" you said,
And laughed.
Laughter filled my head,
Ripped apart my soul.
Embarrassed I was,
Hurt I am.
Now I stand before you,
Listening to your cries.
No one hears,
No one to help.
We're all alone,
Here in the meadow.
"Click-Click"
What a wonderful sound,
Smooth as silk.
You whimper,
and piss your pants.
Now its my turn,
To laugh.
"How come?" I ask,
"Don't... Please.." sqeaks from you lips.
"You ain't laughing now,
B***h!!"
My finger pulls the trigger,
An echo follows.
A surge runs through my viens,
From my head to my toes.
You can't hurt me,
Or anyone no more.
You ain't laughing now,
B***h!
Good-bye my love,
So long cruel world.
"Click-Click"
What a wonderful sound,
Smooth as Silk.
© 2012 lawrence bear
Author's Note
I'm a bad boy.. ain't I ;)
Reviews
hmm, interesting story...poem maybe? I feel Ur anger and revenge...sad as well because U are stuck in the revenge and do the unthinkable...good read though.
Posted 10 Years Ago
I sure hope you don't reel this into reality..:O
Posted 12 Years Ago
I sure hope you don't reel this into reality..:O
sad..
Posted 12 Years Ago
sad..
Well not at all the silk I was thinking that you were thinking of.. lol. Yes your bad but in a good way lol..xx
Posted 13 Years Ago
Well not at all the silk I was thinking that you were thinking of.. lol. Yes your bad but in a good way lol..xx
I love this one, Chilling and so well written. So very amazing Lawrence.
Posted 13 Years Ago
I love this one, Chilling and so well written. So very amazing Lawrence.
You brought me in with a sweet tale of love and heart brake. Closed with sweet revenge. A surprise ending to this poem. I like it. Thank you for this excellent poem.
Coyote
Posted 13 Years Ago
You brought me in with a sweet tale of love and heart brake. Closed with sweet revenge. A surprise ending to this poem. I like it. Thank you for this excellent poem.
Coyote
Well... I used to think falling in love was a blissful and wonderful thing... hmmm... and that is how a mind is changed in an instant.. .smooth as silk.
Posted 13 Years Ago
Well... I used to think falling in love was a blissful and wonderful thing... hmmm... and that is how a mind is changed in an instant.. .smooth as silk.
Absolutely chilling. I was not expecting that abrupt change in tone. Yikes.
Posted 13 Years Ago
Absolutely chilling. I was not expecting that abrupt change in tone. Yikes.
The Friday Night Movie has nothing on this, the pace of this piece plays out in your head like a full feather performance
Posted 13 Years Ago
The Friday Night Movie has nothing on this, the pace of this piece plays out in your head like a full feather performance
Very brutal, I wouldn't call this love but obsession, the kind that kills obviously. I just don't think someone who truly loved would go that far. The story in the poem is very compelling, it shows how far someone can go when they are hurt on many different levels. Great jog on telling this story in poem form.
Posted 13 Years Ago
Very brutal, I wouldn't call this love but obsession, the kind that kills obviously. I just don't think someone who truly loved would go that far. The story in the poem is very compelling, it shows how far someone can go when they are hurt on many different levels. Great jog on telling this story in poem form.
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Added on January 27, 2011
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lawrence bear Fisher River, Northern Manitoba, Canada
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