Witness

The silencer

I found out where my snitch was hiding. The eye witness program, ha I laugh at that. With money, you have power, and with it. You can buy information. The tip led us to the Royal Hotel, the two guys in the squad car, were easily taken care of by my thugs. Nothing like a silencer, it is my best friend.

A flash bomb is chucked through the window.

We storm in shooting the suits in silence, who were caught off guard. There was Charlie, sitting and squirming as usual.

"Nicky... it wasn't me, I swear. They made me..."

"Shut-up Charlie," I grab a handful of hair. "You got sloppy."

"Nicky, Nicky please..."

"So you wanna be a witness." I force him to face the mirror,

I jammed my gun  to the back of his head. With a slight smirk staring at him through the mirror.

"Nicky." he pleaded.

"There is only one thing I want you to see Charles, you see yourself there? Witness this." and I pulled the trigger.

Author's Note

updated version

Reviews

[AuthorEddie]

this was pretty awesome. i read the previous version, too, and i thought that one was good enough as it was. but this one was pretty great too. lol such thrills from a few sentences. awesome! i say you make a book out of this one ;]

[Bette]

ha! harsh! well done!

[Cassandra D.]

I liked this one, but I really really enjoyed reading the other one.
I loved it.

[Sheila Kline]

Ooooh boom boom, and you are history!! Don't worry I won't snitch...smiles
Nice chapter!

[Ashley Cisneros]

I must agree with every other reader here.
This was an amazing story...

[Cassandra D.]

I can't believe you didn't send me a request!
This was completely eye catching!
It was short, but it was worth the read!

[deeps]

Whoa! Straight to the point! Like this very well said and well said.