Killer Within

Your fear, is my supplement

When I don the mask I feel I’m superior,

The look of fear in their faces is what drives me,

Keeps me alive inside.

I hide in the shadows, lurk and wait.

And when the time has come,

My face pops out just for them to see the blackness of my eyes,

The mask I put on.

Then as my blade glimmers in the moonlight,

I step out from the darkness and pursue my victim.

That look of fear is what drives me,

Ignites me, and gives me energy to kill.

The feeling,

The rush I get when I penetrate my blade into their body.

Those looks in their eyes,

The hopelessness they have.

I am ruthless,

I am dark,

Evil,

I have no soul,

No heart,

And my mask is the last thing you will see.

A killer within.

Reviews

[Jūdan FyreHeart]

It's such a simple, blunt view of a masked killer. Knocking them wide open for that brutal analysis. You captured the cold calculating feeling from them very well too.

[AniBaum]

Great. Made me smile.

[Norma M Sutton]

A interesting piece. Strong writing.

[Fran Marie]

The rush I get when I penetrate my blade into their body.

Those looks in their eyes,

The hopelessness they have.

I am ruthless,

I am dark,

Evil,

I have no soul,

No heart,


Wow, KiLLer poem here, you're scaring me , you are too bad you ruthless beast~ j/k ~I enjoyed this piece to the max~Thanks for entering A Dark and Stormy Night~ Got any more bodies lying around?

Great Pen!!

[J.N.R.]

that was intense! :)
real good.
good job!

[Dr.Who.LOVER]

Dude...AWESOME thats all I can say

[Holly]

like slasher flicks huh?
"That look of fear is what drives me,

Ignites me, and gives me energy to kill.

The feeling,

The rush I get when I penetrate my blade into their body." - that was intense =-p

[Wicahpi]

This reminds me of the most frightening moment of my entire life (so far)
and wasn't easy to read, but I did. There are actually people like this all
around us and it's a sometimes uncomfortable feeling.
You did a great job in scaring me, for one..lol

[Cassandra D.]

Dude...You scare the hell outta' me when you write things like that! lol

You have a creative mind to write such crazy things.
I love reading your work! :]

[Hello, Goodbye]

Your fear, is my suppliment - zen loves that.. :D