or maybe not

or maybe not

A Poem by Dominic

Tomorrow will be the day when
I close the gap between my 
better instinct and what 
I do and, if not,
then the 
next 
day
or
the
next
or
for sure 
the next.
Who really knows?
the man in the middle,
the man who lives in the gap knows

© 2011 Dominic


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. this is truly spectacular right till the way it's laid out ... when i read poetry like this, somehow my faith in the universe of verse is restored ... maybe there is no gap ... if you can express so brilliantly ...

Posted 13 Years Ago


well,
you surely have to work on your poems
but i like the feeling,
though your word choice isnt that good at contributing,
you will figur out a way

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Dominic
Dominic

san francisco, CA



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my approach to writing is to edit out while leaving the feeling in. I respond to clarity and simplicity. When I get flowery I get fake. I welcome both good and bad reviews. As for style an.. more..

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