You're perfect

For all the people out there tring to kill themselves,DON'T DO IT,anyway this is for you
If you wanna cry
And all the kids at school make you wanna die
Don't kill yourself
Cause' you really needed help
Please listen
Image the thought what would happen if you went missin'
Would they miss you
Or would they just diss you
It doesn't matter you're perfect the way you are
Remember you're Gods shinnin' star
You are beautiful and unique
If they don't like you remember you'll always be on fleek
Thanks 4 listenin'

Reviews

[BlackPrince]

This is a nice poem of encouragement.

I think there is grammatical error.
It's meant to be 'Trying to kill themselves', instead of 'tring to kill themselves'.

I feel as though you rushed the poem. You didn't put much attention in its grammar and vocabulary (such as lack of punctuation and wrongly spelt words).

However, the overall message can still easily be grasped.

WELL DONE

[lessa (kenzie)]

God is always there for us, so true.
This is sad but at the end hopeful.

[Zoey]

Thank you😊