The thin line

The thin line

A Poem by timthy
"

Explains itself

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Old scars ripping open
Scabs peeling as a token
Salt cured wound of love
Festering and broken

Cursed be
Your devious eyes
Trapped helplessly
In a webbing of lies

I curse your namesake
Oh daughter of Eve
In alliance with the snake
You deceive , I believe...
I love you!
Were you just unaware
Of this heartache so vital?
Or did you just not care
Had me damn near suicidal

To grow old together
Always hoped that we would
Mere words stormy weather
Promise to keep promises good

I would have killed for you
I would have died for you
Blood as tears spilled for you
All those tears I cried for you...
I hate you!

© 2016 timthy


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love is a two edged sword,it cuts both ways..touching write

Posted 8 Years Ago


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timthy
timthy

coloniial heights, VA



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I am a sagittarius, I write based on ultimate highs and surrealistic lows. I usually don't cover the middle ground. Not pessimistic, not optimistic, just REALISTIC. I look forward to critiques, and be.. more..

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