Postcard

Postcard

A Poem by timthy
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Memories of a love lost

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Yearning to retrace
     Our footprints in the sand
Longing to embrace
     The solace of your hand
The sound of your breath
     Perfected in a sigh
A fate worse than death
     A pain I can't deny
The memories we made
     As we strolled the beach together
Memories i would not trade
    They will live with me forever
We floated above the milky way
     With no intent to land
No excuses or words to say
      Love consecrated in the sand
As we watch the tide 
      As it rolls majestically to and fro
We embrace with arms open wide 
      With promise of never letting go
As the fickle tide rolls in
      It sweeps the shore into the deep
To remind us now and then
      Of promises sworn to keep
I took a small vacation
      To the places we used to stay
Overcome by my emotion
      Sands of time, come what may
I cherish our time in the sand
      Even if you blatantly disregard
Walking together holding hands
      I'll send you a postcard.

© 2014 timthy


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Isnt it so bittersweet that for every joy there is an accompanying tear. What grants value to our loves is our sorrow. As with all things there is an end and with it our regrets our remorse and yet still we crave for those things and those moments that make us human . Well done very well done emotion driven as are my own this touches the soul .

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

timthy

10 Years Ago

thank you so much Tate!



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Oh Such a lovely poem. I can see the images in my mind.
Great analogies.
Going into my library.


Posted 10 Years Ago


Isnt it so bittersweet that for every joy there is an accompanying tear. What grants value to our loves is our sorrow. As with all things there is an end and with it our regrets our remorse and yet still we crave for those things and those moments that make us human . Well done very well done emotion driven as are my own this touches the soul .

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

timthy

10 Years Ago

thank you so much Tate!

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timthy
timthy

coloniial heights, VA



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I am a sagittarius, I write based on ultimate highs and surrealistic lows. I usually don't cover the middle ground. Not pessimistic, not optimistic, just REALISTIC. I look forward to critiques, and be.. more..

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