I Don't Know

I devoted this poem to a friend I lost in a car accident. This poem is still very rusty and some pointers to help polish it up would be greatly appreciated. :)

I never knew it would be like this

Happy, sad, angry, and then confused

There are moments where I want to scream my heart out,

Then others where I don't even know what I'm thinking

I don't know

Should I laugh? Should I cry? Should I yell?

I want to feel something, anything

I should be feeling something

I should be moving on

That's what they want; that's what you would want

But sometimes I look myself in the mirror and think: "I just don't know anymore"

I want to, I hope you know that

You're still looking out for me, I know that

I just wish you never left.

Reviews

[sette]

sorry to hear about your friend. nice writing.

[Yemariam Markos]

Thank you so much!