the contemplate

to know if there is a god

or not

absolutely kills me

I know I am young

and have much thinking ahead of me

but to know

any day might be the end

why not know if there is a god or not

why not show proof

why not prove us wrong

why not prove us right

because the only proof we have

is to prove a god isn't real

because why would a god allow so much pain

for everyone

why not just a little bliss

for us all

I believe in science

the bible seems unrealistic

but I hope there is a god

because when I die

I don't want to go into nothingness

but I don't know if I believe in spirits

and the afterlife

but I don't know if I totally deny

the whole idea of a great spiritual being

because I don't know

what is real

and what is not

because this is the contemplate

and I have it in my mind every day

Reviews

[Peter H]

like many other's you have questioned this deity that exist to be real or fictitious, what i can tell you is that it depends on what you rather believe in . i choose to believe in a god but i do deny it at the same time . i'm as conflicted as you are . the idea of this higher being makes us all ponder :) good write you asked a philosophical question that has been pondered for exponential years

[yliana]

it is a question that has been asked for so long, and many more years to come. to simplify it, I just consider myself agnostic :) ill just have to hope there is a god, for now.

[Eve Marie]

Beautiful (:

[yliana]

:)

[Eve Marie]

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[yliana]

what did they post?

[Steven Alexander Williams]

I said it sucks

[yliana]

I don't know why you're so mean to me. I at least don't copy my writings. Sorry if your opinion is negative. I'm not trying to impress anybody with my poems.

[Steven Alexander Williams]

uh me copy my writings? No I don't, you haven't read but 1 chapter so don't start telling me s**t like that. just stop with the poems

[yliana]

I don't even know why I'm arguing with you. I can write and post, WHATEVER I want. Besides, I NEVER told you I had an account to here, and I NEVER even bothered you with my post. YOU read them yourself. YOU found me and YOU wrote a comment on my poems. I did NOT reach out to you on here or anywhere else about my poems & writings. So I can write, whatever I want. If you don't like them, don't read them. Simple as that.

[yliana]

Besides, this poem isn't even about you. Its about my view on spirituality that you already know about. Did you even bother to read it? You probably didn't. You probably just wanted to offend me.