A dark truth behind light

so i did this in like 10 minutes you know just for fun enjoy! and noits not about my life well maybe one part.=)

Many have lied to me, many have been mean, but I still sticked around for some strange reason. I always thought the world would never let me change, that I would be stuck with a tag and a group of friends that would break and laugh at me. I'm not perfect but neither are you but you still broke me down. The world is round but I am not, the world is cruel but I am too. Their was a time I wanted to disappear. A time my dad drank and hit my mom. A time the cops came and my family broke apart. A time I lived in a foster home and met my first love. I lost him, then myself, but I am strong and will live on with all this pain for you even when i'm completely alone after I went mad. I am one out of many that do not have a happy ending but I know someone will come to my rescue.

Author's Note

enjoy

Reviews

[elfthereal]

you can try breaking it down to make it seem less of a flowing puddle of your thoughts and more like a river that takes one through your story if you like. the part about the parents s is very impactful, but the protagonist seem to revolve around herself making her less relatable

[Creative_Nerd]

Is there a second part this coming soon? This doesn't seem like it's finished. The way you end it with "I know someone will come to my rescue" makes it seem that way.

[yesi]

no this is over it was just practice