Your eyes.

Your eyes have been one such source of vision which adds glow to the world
They define you as a lady of judgement coz u see the beauty of life
The fire inside your eye depicts your character
And displays your cuteness over notorious acts
They have been a perfect example as to how u hide the mysterious functions of your heart
To me they are something wonderful which not only adds charm to your looks but also the softness to your beauty
The curve of your eyes samples the smoothness of your swinging moods
It has been a tough job to understand and comment upon what u actually think
And your eyes have made it too simple ,for those who understand, to estimate each emotion u hide
They have been and will always remain so an art that describe the aptness of gods creation

Reviews

[Briana O'Connor]

This is very beautiful. I can see quite vividly the person you portray and the emotions attached.
Here are my suggestions:

Your eyes have been one such source,
A vision which adds glow to the world.
They define you as a lady of judgement,
Seeing the beauty of life.
The fire inside your eye depicts your character,
And displays your cuteness over notorious acts.
They have been a perfect example
Of the mysterious functions of your heart.
To me they are something wonderful,
Adding charm to your looks and softness to your beauty.
The curve of your eyes symbolizes the smoothness of your swinging moods.
It's tough to understand the way in which u actually think,
But your eyes have made it too simple,
for those who understand to estimate each emotion u hide.
They have been and will always remain such an art
Describing the aptness of gods creation.

Thank you for sharing and keep up the good work!

[Passionate_yatish]

Thanks
I was not so well when I wrote it down
And so I couldn't really portray it down well
Thank you so much for suggestion
Hoping for more suggestions on my other poems
Do check them
Thankyou once again dear