The unspoken phase of our relationship.

The happiness of pain is what your love has given me.

I don't yell about the torments of our connection, nor do I display falsehood of being fussy.

I persist in muteness,
And inhale the expertise of existing in public.

The storm devastating calmness inside my head gives birth to million thoughts of bafflement.

My considerations whirl around u and to hide all my mysteries I wear a smile just to reflect a normal state of togetherness.

Whereas, it is now complex to be the way we were, but I dominate my sense not to follow a path of selfishness.

I rely upon your fine knowledge to save our affectionate bond . But somewhere I find myself helpless as you show-up a character of comfort.

I inquire myself"is our love still the same?"
And a voice inside me cross examines by saying " have I fallen for anyone other than my girl"?

At certain point, I realise you are still the same and I'm the one who presumes too much about our relationship.

Pessimist words seep down my brain when you are ignorant about me.

After all the complications , I conclude to attain your attention for my survival and just a glimpse of my nymph to hell me pass all the barriers placed by myself .

To complete my day,
I urge you to hold my hand and guide my through the thorns of my life.
I lust to woo and be a soulmate to consent your opinion.

I dream of being with you, without a scar of problems in our love story.

I fantasise our affection to accrete under the shadow of attachment.

Reviews

[MsJewel]

So many great lines in this poem. I really liked
I dream of being with you, without a scar of problems in our love story.
I believe many of us dream of a perfect love, but reality sets in and nothing is perfect. You have described the give and take of a relationship - of being in love.
A well penned, intelligent poem. Very nice
:) Julie

[Passionate_yatish]

It's has always been a pleasure to read your opinions dear
I've been eloquent about love and been through the wistful part of a relationship in my life
Thank you so much for all your advices
I hope to write down much better next time because there is always a scope of betterment

[Saddam]

To complete my day,
I urge you to hold my hand and guide my
through the thorns of my life.
I lust to woo and be a soulmate to consent your
opinion.

Quite interesting and a Great one. I like your poetry.

[Passionate_yatish]

Thankyou so much

[KWP]

I like this very much :) to be in a relationship is about giving and taking, living and loving, learning and accepting and overtime growing together. You have articulated these thoughts very well, I am certain we all feel insecure at some points throughout our life ... that's just learning ..

Two points I would look at myself are
- starting a lot of lines with 'I' ... can this be changed slightly for example 'I fantasise about our affection' to Fantasising about our affection ...
- be careful of very log lines ... can they be cut and made into two, or can the lines be made shorter ?

NIce work my friend ... xx

[Passionate_yatish]

Thanks a lot for your advices
It will surely help me out
Thankyou so much
Hope you will see me growing mature with my work sooner
I will keep working

[KWP]

Just my thoughts and happy to help in anyway xx

[Passionate_yatish]

It really means a lot dear
Thanks once again

[Simran Kewlani]

It is a great poem. Keep it up.

[Passionate_yatish]

Thanks dear

[Konigin]

I like this... a lot actually. Well done. The words clung to me and resonated deep in my heart. :)

[Passionate_yatish]

Thank you so much dear

[Konigin]

You're welcome! :)

[Passionate_yatish]

Wanna write a poetry collaboration with me?

[Konigin]

Sure! Shoot me an email about your ideas! :)

[melissa]

This is awesome poem keep up the great work and keep sending me more to read i love reading them.

[Passionate_yatish]

Thank you so much dear
You can check my rest of the poems as we'll
Hope you will like them too

[KittyVenus]

this is a powerful piece of poetry! great write! XD

[Passionate_yatish]

Thanks a lot dear