Your beauty!

I LUST TO DWELL IN THE SPARKLE OF YOUR EYES,

& BE THE NEAT OF YOUR CORE.

YOUR EYE LINER GUIDES ME THROUGH THE BEAUTY OF EYES,

THEY SHIMMER TO LIT UP THE DARKNESS OF MY SOUL.

YOU LINK-UP MY HEART TO PRAISE YOUR LOVELINESS,

& WOO THE GLOW OF YOUR CHEEKS.

YOUR PERFECTION IS NOT MERELY THE SPLENDOR YOU CARRY ALONG THE WORLD,

ITS YOUR GOLDEN HEART THAT TEMPTS ME TO APPLAUSE SENSUAL FORM.

MY ADORATION FOR YOU IS THE AMITY OF THE SMILE THAT SPRINKLE OVER TO WIN THE WORLD,

ITS A PARADISE TO WATCH YOU LIVE,

A DELIGHT TO SEE YOUR SPARK BRIGHTEN THE GLOBE,

YOU ARE AN ORNAMENT OF EXCELLENCE WHO WALKS ACROSS TO LET ME LIVE WITH HAPPINESS

& I ADORE YOU FOR BURNING UP THE AFFECTION I HAD FOR OTHER WOMEN AROUND.

ITS YOUR APTNESS THAT MADE ME LOVE YOU.

YOU ARE A NOBLE OF MY SUBLIME LIFE.

Reviews

[KittyVenus]

wow... you should send this to a girl you like on valentines day or something... thats a perfect love poem!

[Passionate_yatish]

For me liking a girl isn't enough
I should love her deeply
Although I've been in love once and in the end it was painful
So I'm a lot more careful now
Anyway Thankyou so much

[For Who I Am]

Wow! This poem can get any girl's heart, even mine!

[Passionate_yatish]

hahaha..lets have a private chat then..:D :P

[For Who I Am]

ha, ha, : )

[Passionate_yatish]

was kidding..
anyway thanks alot buddy
cheers!

[For Who I Am]

Your welcome! anytime! and.... Cheers!!

[MsJewel]

Such lovely thoughts and feelings...you write of romance well. One suggestion - change lit to light in the fourth line.

I love romantic poetry and this is stunning.

:) Julie

[Passionate_yatish]

thanks.
i need more of suggestions
i love to be eloquent about the beauty.
romance is truly pure.