Chapter One

Switched Worlds

Chapter One

            “Wait! What?” I asked again mid-track of what I was about to say. “Your Aunt wants you to come over.” Repeated my overenthusiastic Mom.

 “Ok, but why?” I asked suspicious. “ I have been on my best behavior.”

“Yeah’ said Stephan my annoying five year older brother ‘getting detention last week for hacking into the grading book to change your grade, yup she’s been on her best behavior mom” said Stephan with an annoying smirk.

“I’ve told you she’s evil! She’s gave me an F on my report just because it had nothing to do with endangered animals!” I protested.

“Really Aana ‘endangered animals’ I had Mrs. Wells too and I got an A!” said Stephan.

“Yeah but she likes you, everyone does”

“Really Aana it’s not about liking”

“Yes it is”

“No it’s not”

“Both of you stop it right now!” Dad’s authoritative voice commanded. “Aana your Aunt Evangaline wants you to spend time with your cousin, she’s very eager to see you!” explained Dad in his patient voice.

“But what about James or Charlotte or Stephanie” I asked noting my elder siblings.

“Aana you sisters and are already married as well as your brothers” said mom with a hint of annoyance.

“ James isn’t” I shot back referring to my twin.

“James is helping your eldest brother Eric in Swan Valley so of course of cant come!” said Dad.

“Stephan isn’t soo…”

“Aana you are going even if I have to take you there myself!” Dad said angrily.

“Fine, fine but what do I get out of this?” I grumbled.

“You will see!” said Mom with a mysteries glint in eyes.

And that is how my punishment began!

Reviews

[Ufi Auttorri ~ Amy C. T..]

Do you want affirmation and encouragement or do you want a real review; like your teacher might give you? I say this only because you have "flung" (and I use that word kindly) up a few lines of dialog and while they are rather nice, for the most part, they beg the question, "What are you trying to do with them?" What is your goal? Having read your comments to the other reviewers it seems that you will not be getting back to this startup sketch anytime soon because you are burdened with an overabundance of homework. Alas.

So, I'll leave you with these thoughts. It is reasonably well written. It has mistakes. It's too short to really care much about the characters. There is no background. It seems to fit your sphere of reality (from what I can tell). I'm sure we could be friends. You'll find I always try to tell the truth in the very best way possible. I do not always succeed. :D

[Abbie]

this is really good so far! I can't wait to see what happens next! please continue!

[WriterReaderEct.]

Thank you! i think ill post the second chapter later in a week that is! =)

[Abbie]

Okay! :)

[Dominique]

Ah. this is so far good and I cannot wait for the next chapter. But, what is of come of?

[WriterReaderEct.]

Of come of? lol typo but instead of asking questains just say in blah blah blah where she blah blah you wrote blah blah blah, then i will know what you are saying! lol

[Dominique]

Okay. got that.

[WriterReaderEct.]

ok haha lol!

[Dominique]

Are you going to write more soon???

[WriterReaderEct.]

oh Hii sorry i lost the rest sooo not really and with all the hw ive been getting i havent had the time sooo ill do it sometime but not now!

[Dominique]

Fine. I guess this will do then.

[WriterReaderEct.]

ok :D but do get more people to read it i dont know if anyone else likes it!!!

[Dominique]

Dozens of people like it. Only some review it.