love u because...

I'll love you

because

 you've given me something

  more beautiful than a 

  thousand cherishing dreams..

You're the one who keeps

 my hope safe from the wicked,

the purity and artistry of my soul

 that renders a rose garden.

You're the precious dream unfolding

 an awakening of the heart..

a peaceful remembrance of the calm

                              sea.......

Your mere name, the most beautiful word

  that has ever passed my lips,

giving my heart a pause

  each time i hear it spoken.

You've called me your everything

  in the languages of love,

and i've given you my heart and 

                soul in return,

   I'll always be yours,

   and you'll be mine

         till eternity......

Author's Note

this has got absolutely no rhyme ..worthless i may call it ..but jst a vent to my feelings ....

Reviews

[Art Sun]

Poetry is that music where we speak with imagination, emotion, and true feelings from within...if rhyme was the true art of writing then we would never know the true poetic expressions of so many..

nice work...

[Soul Magic✯]

"Your mere name, the most beautiful word
that has ever passed my lips,
giving my heart a pause
each time i hear it spoken.
You've called me your everything
in the languages of love,
and i've given you my heart and
soul in return,
I'll always be yours,
and you'll be mine
till eternity......" beautifully written from the heart and soul. i enjoyed reading this piece.

[Poetic Beauty]

This is a beautiful free form poem. The thoughts and emotions are clearly conveyed in this piece of writing.

[Coyote Poetry]

Poem is beautiful and filled with hope. A outstanding poem with wisdom and purpose. Thank you
Coyote

[Bette]

i disagree with you it read wonderfully to me, no need to rhyme. well done

[harman kour]

good poem really... and the rhymes dont really matter every time but the emotions do... and you expressed them very well!!!
Love is in the air it seems... :D

[Ecros Lathes]

I love it even though it has no rhyme but it is good non the less.

[Dev]

I liked it,, The alignment is a bit clumsy but the thought behind it is nice