gate of opportunities...

its never too late

opportunity is standing there,

         wait 'o wait!

i unlock it with my lil keys

and look,

         there opens the gate!

takes just a lil while

to make it shine

         just as grapes

         sweeten "the wine"...

it may taste good 

   in the beginning

but slowly

   it tears you within

with daunting tasks

  and a kiss of glory

you fall back

  n yes,

  slowly.......

it's then that you take time

  to realize

that the manor you built 

  is

  crashing down ......

Reviews

[QuothCorvid]

How true, I think we can all understand this. The feelings of victory as you realize the corner you are now stuck in your built up around yourself and you have no way out. The phrase the road to hell was paved with good intentions! I especially like the line "it may taste good
in the beginning
but slowly
it tears you within" Interesting outline for the poem as well it really lends to the feel of disorginization fraught with confusion!

[Abhinav]

lovely write:))
i can feel the emotions behind this
good job !

[Art Sun]

kind of doulble edged poem here...an open gate to opportunities...leading to it's downfall...hmmm

nice work...