Our Oath

Our Oath

By

Jose M. Euvin

 

Once again

Why?

I guess I’ll always live the moment. 

I created this, and I’m the only one who could put a stop to it.

Me

The destroyer of many

Redeemer of none

I’m force to live with this curse, the moment never fades.

I’m meant to relive it over and over again.

 

I can say we are happy even though we not together.

We were never meant to be, we love to torture each other.

What is it that we want; with every opportunity at hand we chose the worse.

As much as I say it won’t happen again, I can’t take control.

 

There’s that shadow that follows me, in it lives her.

In her I live, yet in reality we’re both dead.

Dead to the world and those who care,

 Those who tried to care for us

We are the torn in the rose, which protects all beauty.

Keeping it far out of reach

Untouchable to those who come near

Never letting our guard down for one second, cause we fear the worse.

So we continue to hurt one another just to be able to feel alive.

Loving each other yet having to be apart.

That’s the rules we live by,

Our unspoken oath, and oath of silence and pain,

Which we’ve learn to accept.

 

Reviews

[T. L. O'Neal]

I enjoyed this and it made a lot of sense. Some relationships are just not meant to be. T

[melissa]

Amazing I hope to read more poems from you keep them coming

[PoemRodent]

Overall a good read, keep up the good work and feel free to send me a request when ever..

Love and Thoughts,

Dostani

[pal]

Let me be frank here.
so much thoughts missing links. sure the writer need to make reader think.

pal

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

This is so sad.. so well written i love it but so sorry about the hurt and pain.. love is so hard sometimes.
Great poem Y

Chloe
xoxo

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

Well written. Thanks for sharing. Debileah

[Michael Lopez]

does this come with razor blades...
nice write

[Esprit]

wow, very meloncholy and painful. pretty good. :)

[Eyeliner W***e]

I really enjoyed this.
Good job!

[Stacy A. Foster]

Living in the moment, I wish I had done so before... we tend not to appreciate something until it's gone. Sometimes it's better to walk away though, especially if it really wasn't meant to be and it feels forced.

Loving each other, living miles apart.
Those are the rules we live by,
Our unspoken oath, an oath of silence and pain,
Which we learned to accept.

It's the accepting part that's hard.

Nice write,
Stacy

[Pema Dorje]

... a write of conflict and pain of which again and again we seem to fall into that separation fear and more than that to destroy the hard and implacable hand in bleeding loyalty to unrighteous desire that hell we chase to become one in the fire ... for if by life we cannot be, then fall together rhapsodically ... writeous write, Yaooooooo