Perfect

Perfect

By

Jose M. Euvin

 

In a perfect world

We’ll be together

You’ll be my wife

We’ll live forever

 

I’ll hold you lady

Won't let you go

Teach you the meaning

Of true love

 

The happy moments

We choose to share

Losing you

Just wasn’t fair

 

It's hard to explain

The way I feel

So deep inside

The pain is real

 

I feel the comfort

From rainy days

It hides my tears

They wash away

 

I love the thunder

It hides my  cries

My heart is aching

It screams inside

 

One thing was real

I fell in love

The love I gave you

Was not enough

 

You deserve more lady

I love you!

 

Reviews

[Dead Angel]

it was sweet, then turned sour, but beautifully written. well done! :)

[Fran Marie]

Sad,yet beautifully expressed with deep emotions and well penned~Fran Marie

[BrightEyes]

I like this work...right up until the end! Never shortchange yourself....others rejection of you does not diminish who you are....nor lessen your worth! Love is a gift and should never be taken lightly nor pushed away with arrogance.

laura

[Ladysue]

Breaking up is never easy under any circumstances. It is a loss and it is hard to deal with. I love the last two stanza's. Nice job.

[Papillion]

A sad piece.....we can love someone so much, its hard when they leave.

[DeMorney]

this makes me sad...the words are beautifully put together...i'm so sorry you have to go through this pain.

[Angelheaded Hipster]

I feel the confort (comfort)

From rainie days (rainy)

I like the simplicity of the falling in love/loss of love theme here....I didn't get lost in the words, and I was certainly able to follow along...

Thank you for sending this my way...

[Nicole (Carpe Diem)]

this is sweet, beautiful, and romantic - loved reading it
great job

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

Breaking up is a hard thing to do, it hurts soul deep. Thank you for sharing. debileah

[Alan]

That was awesome :]