Perfect

Perfect

By

Jose M. Euvin

 

In a perfect world

We’ll be together

You’ll be my wife

We’ll live forever

 

I’ll hold you lady

Won't let you go

Teach you the meaning

Of true love

 

The happy moments

We choose to share

Losing you

Just wasn’t fair

 

It's hard to explain

The way I feel

So deep inside

The pain is real

 

I feel the comfort

From rainy days

It hides my tears

They wash away

 

I love the thunder

It hides my  cries

My heart is aching

It screams inside

 

One thing was real

I fell in love

The love I gave you

Was not enough

 

You deserve more lady

I love you!

 

Reviews

[melissa]

I know how you feel before I met my husband I was hurt just like you my ex cheated and I kept taking him back but now I got the perfect man in the world

[PoemRodent]

Overall a good read, keep up the good work and feel free to send me a request when ever..

Love and Thoughts,

Dostani

[Adam Greenfield]

There's a good rhythm with this. It makes for quite a comfortable read.

[Journey]

Heartbreaking...in a good way.

[Emily B]

Depth in simplicity. Awesome write.

[El-Enano]

Dont put your self down, tell her how you really feel. You deserve better not her.

[Sean M. Addams]

very heartfelt piece ... very deep with great flow and imagery .. great job on this one!!!

[Kristizzle9008]

I honestly dont think its deep enough.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

I love the rain and feel safe and somehow 'hidden'.. it is a sad love poem,, love is so hard when it should be so simple.. as it is said better to have loved and lost then never to have loved at all..
I wish your dream would come true..some drams are not mean to be i have discovered.. take care and thanks for writing such a beautiful love poem..

Chloe
xoxo

[desertraven]

excellent poem. heartbreaking and heartfelt.
Nice job!
Sandra♥