Words Unspoken

Words Unspoken

By

Jose M. Euvin

 

 

Maybe I should have asked

Maybe you should have told me

 

I love to watch you sleep

So peaceful in your bed

I long to hear you speak

So many things unsaid

 

“Grab your things and pack”

Was the last you said

Bring peace into my life

And take the pain away

 

Maybe I’ll say

“I love you”

And hope to hear it back

Maybe I’ll try to hold you

And relieve our past

 

Life is not what I expected

Our journey wasn’t long

Your love I have neglected

I never meant to do you wrong

 

There you lay asleep

Your life has come to pass

I gently kiss your lips

And close your dreamy eyes

 

I’ll leave you now

For good

As your wake has come to pass

I’ll give you one last kiss

And burn it with our past

 

I leave you now

With words unspoken

Reviews

[Blackbird Cry]

Heartbraking and written so well I felt each line within.

[Roach]

One word: CHILLS.
Absolutely suspenseful. I love it. So sneaky...

"I leave you now

With words unspoken"

My favorite part.

[desertraven]

well written!
Sandra♥

[Greg the Bard]

I do not find the Typos that indifferent to the work. For me it still carries a great thought and can be easly fixed. Great work

[Valentine]

The thought behind the words in this are touching..If you read through it you might find you need to do a little editing.. for instance.."there you lay sleep" instead of asleep..God bless Valentine