Good Enough

Good Enough

By

Jose M. Euvin

 

 

I’m never gonna be good enough for you

The pain you left

You can’t undo

Even though it hurts inside

You will never see me cry

 

Perfections not for me!

Was it so hard for you to see?

Like a soldier I stand tall

Even though my heart you’ve torn

 

My skies have darken

The rain pores down

My soul is broken

The pain resides

 

I can’t see the light ahead

And

Still you don’t understand

 

My hearts in pieces

You should’ve said no

It was all a game

You never loved

 

You could had stopped the pain

Now life will never be the same

 

“I never really loved you”

Was the last I ever heard!

All I wanted was to hold you

Yet my love you pushed away

 

 

Reviews

[Brette Medb]

The rhyme started out strong only to taper off and then suddenly become sporadic or vacant... the overall writing was good but if you choose to begin with rhyme it should stay that way... that's just my opinion but enough about that. The poem was pretty good.


Brette

[melissa]

I just can't get enough of reading your poems they just so amazing

[PoemRodent]

Overall a good read, keep up the good work and feel free to send me a request when ever..

Love and Thoughts,

Dostani

[pal]

"I'm never gonna be good enough for you;The pain you left;You can't undo;Even though it hurts inside;You will never see me cry

"Perfections not for me!"

Was it so hard for you to see?;Like a soldier I stand tall;Even though my heart you've torn"

very well put. perfections not for me, coz i m not good enough for you, thats what you think.. yet i am too perect and stand like a soldier, you dont see.. n even though it hurts, never see me cry.

keep this up. lovely poem
pal

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

Very well described pain. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

[Stacy A. Foster]

I think this would be suited better for spoken word because of the emotion and use of grammar. Facial expression could be seen and interpreted if recorded and I think a tone could help drive the point home, especially with those last lines.

"I never really loved you"
Was the last I ever heard!
All I wanted was to hold you
Yet my love you pushed away

There's a bitterness in this that draws the reader in to the anger and hurt felt.

Cheers,
Stacy

[El-Enano]

Wow, thats all i have to say.

[R J Askew]

Groan, that last verse says it all...the cruelty of love...over and over again. For every happy lover there is one who is the opposite it seems. Yet we have little choice in the matter.

[Crystal]

This is a great write. You have written about your pain and loss very well.

[Antony]

I find you to be good at pulling on the heart of the reader, you write well about loves loss and the description of your feelings are always presented strongly.
Tony

[Diana Owen Busy with Li..]

this is a really good piece. I enjoyed it immensely