I Did Love

I Did Love

By

Jose M Euvin

 

I did love

Unlike you

 

I loved you more

More than you could imagine

 

Place your hand upon my heart

And tell me how it feels

 

Can you feel it?

It’s been broken

By you

 

My heart never beats the same

Since that day you went away

 

My face

Will always have a smile

While my heart face its trials

 

Love!

What do you know about love?

Other than its meaning

A book can never teach its feeling

 

Love!

Just another tool you used for hate

In order to forget your rotten fate

 

Love!

To you is just another word

Because those books

Could never teach you more

 

All those times you cried

And begged for me stay

I always did

Because unlike you

I didn't want your heart to brake

 

Look at you now!

Unhappy like were before

Pouring out your heart to me

Crying on the phone

 

For now I’ll lied

And tell the world your name

Estella

This way I could

Explain your cruel intentions

Towards this poor fella

 

If they wonder how I got the name

I will never say

Take this secret to my grave

 

For my hearts been broken

And is time you feel the same

 

Reviews

[Sara Muschweck]

You have bared your pain to the world with eloquence and equanimity. You have done a wonderful job of laying your hurt out, without being petty and vindictive. I applauded your control, and your talent. Well done.

[Spoken]

Very emotional. Written through the eyes of the broken hearted. Often we wish our pain onto the ones who have pained us

What do you know about love?
Other than its meaning
A book can never teach its feeling

so true.. well written!

[Dead Angel]

whoa, this poem has both hatred and sadness in it. very intense writing here. i like how you wrote it as if you were actually talking to her, makes the reader feel like their walking in your shoes. very creative poem. :)

[Papillion]

This was sad,my heart has been broken and I felt it all in this piece. A really emotional and expressive piece of writing.

[Alex Glasser]

I really like how you wrote this. It sounds musical if you speak it out loud.

I wonder what would happen if I or you applied music to this.

[Nicole (Carpe Diem)]

so sad, beautifully written... great emotion running throughout the poem.

[Tania Leigh]

Very candidly expressive....I like the way you added exclamation points for emphasis at certain points......the anger and resentment comes through this piece effectively.

Good write!