In Silence

In Silence

by

Jose M. Euvin

 

 

Sleeping in silence

Screaming inside

 

Wish you could hear me

So

I can open my eyes

 

The cups are filled

With tears I shed

 

Scream of depression

While lying in bed

 

The night is immense

And

Sour are the tears

 

The silence amends

The worst of my fears

 

Can one really live

When life is a dream

 

Can I really expect

For you to hear my screams

 

The heart's really silent

When there's nothing left

 

It's hard to feel anything

With the calling of death

 

Reviews

[Querida]

The sheer emotion in this piece is what strikes me as the most inviting. You can nearly feel and hear this girl as she screams for release. Your flow is amazing, if a teensy bilt stilted. Personally, I believe this enhances the read. How can one create amazing, smooth rhythms when life itself does not work that way?

I truly found beauty in this pice of art.

[Victoria Lee~]

That was an amazing write... Hauntingly sad.... yet still beautiful!

[El-Enano]

Wow that was deep

[Thoughts]

these feeling comes & goes in real life........you portrayed it very well through this poem...good job.

I feel that your poem is slightly similar to my written story...plzz check that out & give your review.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

The flow is great on this .. the poem is one i have felt before. i think writing helps when we have these feelings.. this is truly a good read and write.

Chloe
xoxo