En�ar�

Story in peotry form

 

Enïarí

Enïarí! O Eniari! Cry the eagles flying,
the wind is blowing, and o the clouds are sighing,

Far away, o leagues away the city is calling,
Forest friends, good forest friends, will you be responding,
For come dark clouds, o many clouds of evil,
And halls they are burning and defences about to fail.

On the horizon, flashes of light are sailing.
Grand elven horns singing away the wailing,

Like sweet voices out-calling the un-tuned,
Riders from the south and north ridding the plains of ruined,

We celebrate this red day of free will,
And praise the forest elves for their arrival!'

Author's Note

Ignore stanzas (story in poetry form)

Reviews

[victoriamaggie]

is most of the rhyming supposed to be the last three letters of everything or something?
oh, and i better look up the word stanza in the dictionary-i forgot what it meant!
:S

[Bella-Marie]

I didn't get the rhyming at first, because they were either really bad, ok and one pair passed the mark. Your note made everything much more clearer, and now I really like this poem! Unfortunately the confusion takes away some points. Overall, great.