The Power Of Bullshit

It's not over yet

Bending

Twisting words to fit a new shape
To make new sentences

That will break the order
In the smooth surface of her face

I want to see

What displays behind those eyes
Shake a natural response out of her
Have her squirm

Only for a bit longer this time
Push the unwritten boundaries a little further
Take note

Follow up

And try again the next day
When all has been forgiven

All the letter's been washed away

Baby doll

Give in to the pressure of my moving lips
Hand over the signed papers

Your resignation

I want now
There's no need for this game to be played no more
Walk over

Admit your defeat to me

And you will be spared
From complete devastation you shall be kept

Raise your chin

Take the hit like you said you can
And I will laugh

Unce the mark settles on your skin
When that little light goes off inside your head
Crystal clear you will see

That the gun I just cocked
Is the I'm-f*****g-with-you kind

Author's Note

Not sure what I think of it, but it had to come out.
English is not my first language, so please help me correct any errors.
Thank you for reading.

Reviews

[daninstockholm]

very interesting!! I like this a lot! BTW, you use english very very well!

[Crow]

I luv how you express the truth with such clarity, I find you have a wonderfull mastery of the English language. Remember the beauty of poetry is a language unto itself.

Extremely well written!

[Luke Ritta]

the last stanza was very good..just like the rest of the poem..well done.