The Demon And The Siren

Who wins?!

We were in this together,
Now you're in this alone.

As I stood beside you, as I watched you
I saw the change in your smile, saw your fire burn out,
The ashes of your pride now a pile at your feet.

Girl, you were never good for me.

All that I gave came to perish in your grasp;
It never reached its aim, never filled its purpose,
The void in your heart, it feeds and grows,
Like a black hole eating you from the inside,
I tried to hold you together, to keep you from falling apart,
But the source of your wounds got lost in the blood,
My hands they got tainted by the dark and red mess,
Your burden I could never lift from your chest.

Forgive me my love, I did do my best.

Yet it wasn't enough and now I know why;
It was not in your plan to ever be saved,
The efforts I made, they all were in vain,
Finally I can see you for what you truly are,
The damage you've caused to both me and yourself;
Cannot be fixed, which is why you have to go.

You selfish b***h, I'll give you what you deserve.

There's a reason why you came to me, you knew about the evil;
That lodge within in my soul and this is the task that was appointed to me,
I will carry this through since this is our fate, but for you it ends here,
And I congratulate you on your feat; you bring out the worst in me.

You negligent c**t, you were never good for me.

Author's Note

Thank god it's done!
This took me a week to produce! I've been writing stuff and then deleting it, writing some new stuff and then deletet, but today I finally came up with a concept I'm happy with.
Now that this creative frustration is out of my system, I hope I can go back to writing my essay lol.
Inspirations for this:
The Word Alive
In Fear And Faith
Adept

English is my second language, tell me about any errors, thank you for reading!

Reviews

[Crow]

I love the macabre touch to this imaginative tale of a love tossed.

[Alex W]

Genuinely loved it, great flow to it without rhyme, which doesn't always happen.

Loving the use of the word 'c**t' in the last line, it's very effective (think i've used it before too like that lol), great overall feel to it.

Kudos! 90/100