You just think you are alone

You just think you are alone

A Poem by Jacob

You just think you are alone

or is it that in the beginning of the road

you felt really so alone

so much alone for a month or two

that you got used to that

 

But you are not

 

You just think you are alone

but you are not

spread your roots to life surrounds

in a person walking by

in a bird, in a leaf

in the soil and in your love

 

You are not alone

 

You are not alone because you have so much to give

don't be a fool to think you don't

show your flower, share your fruit

you are together

don't be afraid

you just think you can't guard yourself

everything that is yours

all that is yours deserve to be safe

 

You are not alone

You are together.

 

 

 

 

 

© 2008 Jacob


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This is such a sensitive p oem, full of feeling, full of skill.

'You are not alone because you have so much to give' - that really shows that by giving, you share, and, by sharing you become part of companionship or a relationship.. it's a fine, fine phrase.

There are a few err ors but in a way, the y enhance y our words.

Thank you for sharing. I look forward to reading more of your poems or st ories

Posted 16 Years Ago


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emz
A wonderful poem, written with so much tenderness.

Yos sent me this and i'm glad he did.

Quite beautiful

Emma

Posted 16 Years Ago


This was interesting. Very cool! Yos sent this to me to read and I don't regret it. Great thoughtful piece, Cheers,lea

Posted 16 Years Ago


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