the never ending storyA Story by ehere I write a story with terrible punctuation, ridiculous amount of tense changes and unnecessary aggressive CAPS: “Long long ago there was a young man that sat atop a mountain , he lived there some nights, but never too long. Until one night, he decided to camp there forever. Everyone around him-- his family his friends-- approached him with fear. Who on Earth?! would want to sit and stay there? It wasn't long before someone else came up. To join him? Neigh- to spy on him I could say. Two men sat there with one another, on the opposite side but very obvious to the other man’s eye. They sat there with a lens to seek what was so appealing about this. I say nothing, oh dear GOD nothing. Let’s leave, one man said, and the other decided to stay. Now two men atop this mountain, one for pleasure and the other out of curiosity. Now to the city, two men were weird, but became the second man was appealing and cool, so many others decided to join too. So, I guess now, the town all sat atop this mountain, with really no reason why, but because one man did, I guess the rest began to follow. The story behind the one man’s tale to initially isolate from the others was this-- he decided to leave his town forever because he could NOT STAND the others! For those others that he lived around were so mesmerized by one another, only following those who received great honor, but never following those who seemed to think a bit more. What was the point of LIFE he asked? When I continuously surround myself with talented a******s. Those who only do things for others, and who appeal to one another. They don’t know about life, do they? That life isn’t about living for others? That it’s about living for yourself first.. to appeal to yourSELF first.. to appreciate yourself FIRST.. before you do to others. So, that’s the reason he left the city, to come atop this mountain, so he could figure out what he appreciated about himself, what he understood and how he wanted to make his life. But what happened then? Only then, when he left he was noticed, but really just hated. But then one man that everyone liked came to follow him, a bit creepy if you ask. So he was followed and spied for, and I guess it was alright at first. But I was selfish, yaknow? I just wanted to be alone. But as time went by, more and more people joined until he COULDN’T TAKE IT anymore. So there ya have it, I moved back down right back to my own city. When I left, I heard a voice speak-- this time from a KID.. a new generation. He said to me, mister, you’re so weird for going down. No one else is there. I said, well yes I am, aren’t I, and left. That child was only young, never knowing his family once lived there, in fact, we all probably lived there. But I guess he would never know? Now I became the weird kid again, going back to my own town. And whatdya know-- that kid followed me here, right back to his very own home.” - gramps, why did you tell me this story? It’s just going to repeat itself again. years later passed. - son, i want to tell you a story about the past. "Long long time ago…." © 2015 eAuthor's Note
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