Life, but Death

Just got some inspiration nothing amazing, but i hope you like it anyways.

                                                 Starring eyes,

               looking deep into my soul.

Seeing the bright light,

                                     that seems to disappear when needed.

It runs away,

                       when needed most,

          to take away the terror.

                            Bright but fleeting, 

                                       loving but abandoning, 

                                                 beautiful with hatred, 

                                                                   stronger than itself.

Reviews

[Robyn]

wow, this is a very nice poem to read.. I especially love the last line...
"stronger than itself"

this poem makes you think, and thats a great thing!