Something's Wrong

This is something I did in english class, kind of weird. Idid it in about 15 min. hope you like.

I feel trapped

even if I am free

I do not understand

but why do I feel this way

I ask myself

 

On the coldest night

I feel warm

On the hottest day

I shiver

 

A distanse

between me and

 those I love

but why

I fear

is it something

I have done

I'm scared

 Do I not belong

We are all at lines

that may not be

crossed

 

Though I myself

feel the urge

to leave this place

it is terrifying

 

Author's Note

I know it ttly sucked

Reviews

[Essy]

the content of the poem is good, i can sense the emotions well. good phrase structure, but it felt a little choppy