Tear You Apart

Tear You Apart

A Poem by xxxYamiHimexxx
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What you've done to me,
Can I do to you?
You made my life darker
Than the darkest blue.
I'll be the beginning
Of your end,
Because my heart
Will never mend.
I'll tear apart
Your hopes and dreams
And what your
Existence means.

© 2011 xxxYamiHimexxx


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i love this poem...the rhyming was awesome and it showed its true meaning

Posted 13 Years Ago


I love this. The rhyme is good and you show so much emotion in it. And the way you started it is good too. Let your hatred flow.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Love the rhyme scheme, this is amazing!

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Added on October 26, 2011
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hi!! :D i'm...im not gonna tell u my name. XD sorry. im 13, and im pretty depressing for one :P but really, i never seem depressed if u've never actually met me XD more..

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