suicide

this isnt mine its my friends just feel like this now and wanna post it <3

blood drips down from her wrist,
she still clinching the razor blade.
she cries for the sweet relief of death,

then she falls to her knees crying from the pain of life.

her head hits the pillow,

her parents awoke they found her lifeless body,

covered in her own blood.

the parents fall to there knees crying.

Reviews

[Death Girl]

Wow this is amazing. I have felt that way about killing myself but I have not really done a serious attempt on my life. I love this

[WrittenStarts]

Too real. It should be *their, but very shocking and sad. It's sad that this happens...

[Time's The Bond]

Vivid and clear.

There should be their

Keep writing! :-)

[soliloquy]

Holy s**t!! This is extremely real and sad.

[Kaylor Mason]

Sadly death is a relief all too real sometimes