I should give up

I should give up

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I should give up,
Why even try?
I act like I'm okay,
Cant you see that's a lie?
I have all these problems in mt head,
They're cutting deep filling me with dread.
I hide, I fake, wont let it come out,
I wont let you see this pain burning about.
but its there, the feelings, the problems, the pain.
I'm sad, angry, depressed, insane.
bur no one even cares,
why save myself?
when my friends don't even dare.
I should give up
why even try?
this isn't me
its all a lie, lie, lie


© 2012 ...


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Don't give up, ever. Without that, what is it all for?

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sad poem. I can relate to it...I wanna give up...thankies for sharing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

No Kimmy...you shouldn't give up...Vicky's sorry she's one of the ones who has, but please stay strong...iwuvu so muchies.....

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 16, 2012
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