you don't understand

you don't understand

A Poem by ...
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I hope this help you see what other people see a lil more....

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I understand 
you think your worthless,
A pain, Insane.

You think no one loves you 
You think no one would care,
If we all woke up
and you weren't there.

you fight all day,
You fight all night.
Thinking your such and ugly sight.
Stepping to the very edge, 
Nearing close to the ledge.

Thoughts of rage and self hate..
building,
boiling,
in your brain,.

I understand...

but you you don't understand,
I don't see worthless!
I don't see anything you see!
I see a girl scared, in pain, and lonely.

I don't see a failure, 
annoying and depressed.
I see a warrior fighting the best!

Fighting for her friends, her future, and even herself.
just a little more fighting and you'll be out of this hell!
You are human you will fall,
just like the best of us all.

don't worry I'm here.
even when you're gone,
deep in the dark.
I'll be here,
we'll be here.
please don't fear.

You don't have to hide.
I know your pain.
It's gonna hurt and its gonna fade.
just keep being strong,
hang on for not so long,
cause without you
I don't know what I would do.

so please stay.
one day,
it will all be ok..

© 2012 ...


Author's Note

...
not planned out well and not good with spelling or grammer...but still just wanted you to see this...

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liked this over all feeling of caring for others
others that are in need ...a true friend you are
words flow very well
thank you for sharing

Posted 11 Years Ago


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11 Years Ago

thank u :)
your should be you're/

Not a bad read I liked it.

Please do check out some of my poems

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I liked it, it was raw, sometimes we dont need to over plan a poem, I enjoyed it

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I don't care about any grammar or spelling errors there might have been it's still...still close to making me cry...-hugs tight-

Posted 12 Years Ago



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