It's What You Do To Me.

The feeling of the warm sun on the coldest day

The great up lift when every things going your way

When you laugh so hard ,you fall to the floor

When you have it all and need nothing more.

The times you look up at the stars and suddenly feel hope

When you play tug of war and are the last one with the rope

Your done the hardest day at work and schools out

The best days where you just want to jump and shout.

The year when everything in life is just going right

When your with the best girls and stay up all night

The mornings you get up out of bed and just want to dance

When you know you screwed up but have another chance.

When you see him and your heart hurts so good

and there’s nothing to say because your so understood

The way I go so crazy over your love

You make me feel all the above.

Reviews

[solo2be]

A very beautiful poem, you can feel the emotion behind it.

[deeps]

This is wonderful. I like this it is lovely.

[Paradoxical]

I love how you could so easily rhyme and make it make perfect sense. PLus the emotion is great! an overall great poem, love it!!