flightless tree

flightless tree

A Poem by xxmusikchickxx

breez flows right threw me

i am a tree in the wind

i sit and i wait

© 2009 xxmusikchickxx


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The message behind your Haiku is beautiful...quite clever. However, breez (should be breeze) and threw (should be through). Overall, it was a good read! Keep exercising your gift.

Posted 15 Years Ago
Amazing what we can do with a haiku, right? As the overly-philosophical person I tend to be, I see a great many applications for this one... And it rings just as true for each one of them. Nice job.

Posted 15 Years Ago

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xxmusikchickxx
xxmusikchickxx

flint, MI



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MySpace Playlist at MixPod.com i live in flint michigan,where murder is a sport,crime runs in the gutters and it lines every street cornor.im 16 with a passion for any of the arts.i dance in the .. more..

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