cryings no sin

it flowed down her cheek

too fast to brush away

again her tears fall

Reviews

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In such a small piece you were able to paint a vivid picture of her pain and distress. Too fast to brush away again her tears fall...this shows the deep pain that has overcome her. I think that this was an excellent Haiku. Excellent read! I'm sure we all can relate to this piece. We all experience deep pain or grief. Keep exercising your gift!

[BlyndSikick]

Personal experience or "out of body experience"? I'd really like to know the inspiration behind this one... You're doing well with these haikus. Keep up the good work!

[lauren emily]

I like this. Short, simple..but to the point.
Very nice work, :)

~Lauren