Dreams

A poem that I just made up. Something was giving me an urge to stop writing my book for a couple minutes so this is what I wrote during my break.

Dreams,

Something I lost a long, long time ago.

Dreams,

Shattered by memories, I know longer want to know.

Dreams,

Pushing me deeper down, to an all-time low.

Dreams,

A thing through my mind that would freely flow.

Dreams,

They started out small, and continued to gro.

Dreams,

I can dream, and I'm screaming at the world, for all to know.

Author's Note

Ignore grammar problems.

Reviews

[J.Black]

Short but simply a good scribble Cory! I think you could have went on a little longer though because ya know, dreams never have an ending, they seem to go on forever and ever! Other then that, don't stop dreaming. Dreams let you imagine, it let's you be creative.

[Steffi]

Short but very impactful.
Ignoring the grammer, the only thing i can say is maybe develop this a little bit more. it can be longer. The rhyming was very nice. It flowed very well

[Lady leah]

very nicely penned write.