My Heart

a bottemless pit of pain

touched with hardships i can't bear

the pain is so severe

that everything quakes to think of there

pain ruptures all the peace

that once could hold its voice

but now it shouts give up!

as the pain shrouds my joy

what was once was live and bubbly

has quickly been drowned out

as pain slowly encompasses me

my joy will will not win this bout

Reviews

[Hello, Goodbye]

Love the flow and imagery. Its pain is evident in every line and I like the way that its expressed.